I am really tired this evening. I fell asleep on the train
tonight trying to read my WIP back. Usually it draws me in and often serves to
wake me up.
Not tonight. I am reading it through in preparation for
beginning a rough edit. I have to say I struggle with editing my own work. I
tend to see what I think is there rather than what is.
My only trick for getting past that is to read out loud.
Usually if I do that I can focus on what is on the page not on what I imagine.
Well it is Wednesday and given I was AWOL on my family
emergency last week I thought I should give you a tricky one this week.
So what on Earth do you think this is?
7 comments:
Lol Well my FIRST thought was of two exhausted sperm. My second thought was of an elecrical outlet surrounded by fire. I have no third thought. Lack of caffeine.
Button holes! But I like Anne's sperm suggestion! LOL!
I could never read stuff aloud so am in awe that you do and that it helps! Yay! Take care
x
Reading aloud is the best tool in my writer's toolbox--I hear things that need to be fixed better than I can see them on the page.
As for what that is...looks like two very short con trails in a Martian sky to me. ;)
tricky is an understatement. I have absolutely no clue. But I do find reading my work aloud to be quite helpful. Good luck editing - I'm about to head into revisions myself :)
I also had a terrible bout of exhaustion last week, so you have my sympathy.
I think it's neon lights of some sort, although I'm pretty sure I'm wrong.
:-)
If you hadn't said what 'on earth' do you think this is, I would have said and alien's nostrils - If I believed in aliens. ;)
I'm too tired to even think coherently. Tough picture. I dunno. Maybe a certain Mr. & Mrs. Worm, in the midst of a family feud? Oh dear, I think they're dead. Fried in place. Poor things. Crud. Really am tired. Time to call it a day.
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